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Love Birds

Posted by Josh on June 25, 2008

Every morning we’d hold hands
Sit by the window and watch the birds
Sipping on coffee to rid the sleepyness
Listening to the same familiar chirps

Two love birds, everyday, same time
Would sit on the branch closest to the window
We’d watch them for hours
But they may have come to watch us too

Years have passed, as have the birds
We haven’t a clue as to why they’ve gone
But years after their last visit
My one and only true love has also passed on

The doctors have no clue of what happened
She died in the night without a sign
I woke up that morning
With her peaceful hand still in mine

Now, out there on that tree
The love birds return to their branch
They looked at me, then for my partner
But in their eyes they know she won’t be back

One flew away after my love was gone
No longer the two of us, or two birds
Although one of them still visits me
The one my late true love called hers

8 Responses to “Love Birds”

  1. faizaabi said

    lovely poem but a bit sad.Can’t dare to imagine that it had really happened.

  2. Sophie said

    Beautiful

  3. Bill said

    I started writing poetry when my wife died 36 years ago at the young age of 22.
    Your poem,Love Birds is the poem I wish I had written.
    It brought a tear to my eye.
    I have read some of your other poems, I don’tknow your age, but you are a very talented poet. I love originality.
    Thank you.

  4. Josh said

    Faizaabi:
    Thank you, yes it takes a melancholy turn about half way through. Also, It is fictionalized, I wrote it as a way of telling a story.

    Sophie:
    Thank you as well, I love hearing people appreciating my work.

    Bill:
    I’m sorry to hear about your wife. But am glad that you enjoyed my poem, you may never know how much I appreciate comments like yours, they really do keep the inspiration flowing. I, myself, am 25, that poem was written when I was 22 or 23. I’ve been writing since I was 14 or 15. As you might have noticed from some of my earlier poems (mostly the first few Heartquakes) I went from teen-angsty poems to more serious topics. About a year ago I decided to stop writing poetry all together, and since have only had a few attempts at returning. But comments like yours really make me want to pick up a pen and a piece of paper again. A million thanks to you, and I would love to read some of your work some day.

  5. Bill said

    Josh, your age surprises me. You write far beyond it. You decided to stop writing??? You only think you have! Your voice will find you again and you will write with a vengeance.
    Believe me, I tried to stop a few times myself and came back writing better than ever.
    I look forward to hearing you have returned, you are too talented to stop.
    When I retire, soon,I hope…I am going to go for the gold. I will jump into writing 100% and make a career out of it. If you believe, it already happened, all you have to do is catch up with yesterday’s dream…
    My name is Bill Wasson, remember my name and contact me after you see my first book on the market. This is my belief, let’s see if it really happens!
    Again good luck…you really are that good and I say that to very few writers.

  6. apasn said

    d poem wz marvelous…….i jz don hv wrds 2 express ma feelins……..it relly brought tears in ma eyes as well as ma heart began 2 cry……!!!!!!

  7. sleepingspirit said

    Touching…

  8. Primoz said

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